tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-722740463726614666.post4026509556415915317..comments2023-11-03T05:15:10.848-04:00Comments on Cutest Landing: Boy, its getting hot in here...yet ironically, temps hit record lowsSarahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10444784814793987285noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-722740463726614666.post-72934618226505836582012-02-16T20:44:32.570-05:002012-02-16T20:44:32.570-05:00great scene and the picture is hilarious naughtine...great scene and the picture is hilarious naughtiness!Tara Tylerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07587802105993889515noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-722740463726614666.post-46247476160961369192012-02-15T23:25:20.007-05:002012-02-15T23:25:20.007-05:00This is fantastic! The writing is smooth and clea...This is fantastic! The writing is smooth and clean and great! The tension is awesome!Lisa Reganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12899014095250160853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-722740463726614666.post-12728666349701250392012-02-15T21:32:11.363-05:002012-02-15T21:32:11.363-05:00THANKS Laura! I saw that in an earlier draft, made...THANKS Laura! I saw that in an earlier draft, made a note, and completely forgot! I meant to insert a line about scraping his arms on the wall before pulling her towards him or something.Sarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10444784814793987285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-722740463726614666.post-77926832552268035432012-02-15T21:32:02.568-05:002012-02-15T21:32:02.568-05:00Awesome scene, lots of tension! You definitely can...Awesome scene, lots of tension! You definitely can scribe a kissing scene without reservation!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-722740463726614666.post-21794771842797312122012-02-14T23:15:04.333-05:002012-02-14T23:15:04.333-05:00Great characters and I'm really curious to kno...Great characters and I'm really curious to know what else there is about them.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-722740463726614666.post-90640684606585364752012-02-14T22:59:12.762-05:002012-02-14T22:59:12.762-05:00Great tension!Great tension!Adrianne Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18108123882094459747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-722740463726614666.post-57821089533027060932012-02-14T22:30:20.453-05:002012-02-14T22:30:20.453-05:00I love him and hate him at the same time. A great ...I love him and hate him at the same time. A great character to glimpse inside. Thanks for the V-day scene!Jess Storkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07001356586353583612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-722740463726614666.post-65233582340752065092012-02-14T21:38:19.480-05:002012-02-14T21:38:19.480-05:00I mainly love the being pushed into a wall, I'...I mainly love the being pushed into a wall, I'm a sucker for that :) (Awesome scene, if you watch the movie Catch and Release. It's an amazing scene)Lynn(e) Schmidthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13111991752818662608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-722740463726614666.post-7242741380318716352012-02-14T20:36:46.807-05:002012-02-14T20:36:46.807-05:00Oh wow! I love your characters! I'm so glad th...Oh wow! I love your characters! I'm so glad these few blogfests have introduced me to them! Great job!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00503400522084515874noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-722740463726614666.post-88345310339575398612012-02-14T18:21:58.124-05:002012-02-14T18:21:58.124-05:00That's an epic scene, sealed with a kiss. Nice...That's an epic scene, sealed with a kiss. Nice one!<br /><br />I'm glad joined this hop. Now following. :)David P. Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-722740463726614666.post-44022778671697111072012-02-14T17:50:24.400-05:002012-02-14T17:50:24.400-05:00For someone who doesn't write kissing scenes, ...For someone who doesn't write kissing scenes, I think this is great, especially for an early draft. WTG!LynNerdKelleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04167392990015741278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-722740463726614666.post-62641943856058304802012-02-14T17:06:46.630-05:002012-02-14T17:06:46.630-05:00Love reading kissing scenes! :)Love reading kissing scenes! :)Lydia Kanghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00484415427764822386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-722740463726614666.post-57109401360133337682012-02-14T16:09:43.832-05:002012-02-14T16:09:43.832-05:00Hi - nice to meet you - this is a really strong sc...Hi - nice to meet you - this is a really strong scene and I love the tension between them. The only bit of crit I have is that he has her pressed up against a wall and then he runs his hands down her back... I needed some physical space to be made for this to happen as it slightly jolted the image in my head... other than that - perfect and when can I read the book?! :)<br />LxLaurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03604785269958873474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-722740463726614666.post-25854579035206904272012-02-14T15:42:14.682-05:002012-02-14T15:42:14.682-05:00I absolutely love this because the story behind wh...I absolutely love this because the story behind what's going on has got to be fantastic! I want to keep reading! And that picture you posted at the end, HILARIOUS!!!! Happy Valentine's day :)Hope Robersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877380868985454894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-722740463726614666.post-44312831743616103492012-02-14T15:33:19.521-05:002012-02-14T15:33:19.521-05:00Considering you say you don't like to write ki...Considering you say you don't like to write kissing scenes you could have fooled me. I thought this was great. It had tension and desire and I loved it! And that picture = Hilarious! New follower *waves*Theresahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10957479478228268972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-722740463726614666.post-3823542305711691072012-02-14T13:51:29.936-05:002012-02-14T13:51:29.936-05:00I agree. I totally felt his love for her in this l...I agree. I totally felt his love for her in this little bit. Loved the 'Then breathe.' Ya baby!Cassie Maehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17706774393186819619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-722740463726614666.post-18887545289082805732012-02-14T13:38:02.007-05:002012-02-14T13:38:02.007-05:00You CAN write a kissing scene. This was great Sara...You CAN write a kissing scene. This was great Sara!Angela Cothranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09243582290698922119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-722740463726614666.post-46011333286036289862012-02-14T13:13:56.657-05:002012-02-14T13:13:56.657-05:00"Then breathe." HOT!"Then breathe." HOT!Emily R. Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03892444969625637064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-722740463726614666.post-29175919292244748962012-02-14T12:34:28.464-05:002012-02-14T12:34:28.464-05:00Beautiful - Loved it!!Beautiful - Loved it!!Bonniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01265154793887852606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-722740463726614666.post-71054095005331407832012-02-14T11:22:24.121-05:002012-02-14T11:22:24.121-05:00You're too hard on yourself. This scene was en...You're too hard on yourself. This scene was engaging. I really like the line, "Then breathe."Susan Oloierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07311938400999953443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-722740463726614666.post-5921853492463320992012-02-14T09:43:17.868-05:002012-02-14T09:43:17.868-05:00For someone who claims to not be romantic, I think...For someone who claims to not be romantic, I think you did a great job. I'd maybe make the dialogue a bit more oblique and ramp up the physical description and sensory detail. Fun!<br />And the picture is priceless. Thanks for sharing.<br /><br />I'm #52 on the hop.<br />And, if you're looking for an anti-Valentine, check out www.jaggervalentine.com.Dawn Iushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546425873531022196noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-722740463726614666.post-35317027313213787742012-02-14T09:25:11.236-05:002012-02-14T09:25:11.236-05:00I hate writing kissing scenes too. I'm always ...I hate writing kissing scenes too. I'm always thinking they sound so juvenile. But yours was good. I liked what was going through his head before he kissed her...and after about not caring about the consequences.Luanne G. Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15762881276976395955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-722740463726614666.post-59792174141707158842012-02-14T01:58:53.198-05:002012-02-14T01:58:53.198-05:00Yes, it just got hot in here and I love that pictu...Yes, it just got hot in here and I love that picture at the end.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-722740463726614666.post-49604758309527599892012-02-13T23:51:48.322-05:002012-02-13T23:51:48.322-05:00OMG that picture is freaking awesome! Also, I lik...OMG that picture is freaking awesome! Also, I like the dialog here, and Damien's inner thought. If your looking to 'steam it up', I'd add maybe a bit more details about the physical nature of things. I get that Damien is thinking about his job, but what's his physical reaction to kissing her? A desire to be physically closer? A hyper awareness of touch?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12106399041059595196noreply@blogger.com